TO: Vanessa Serotta FROM: Nancy Atwood SUBJECT: Presentation
Dear Vanessa,
I looked over the presentation you sent me. The basic points are well-organized, but I think there is room for improvement. First of all, you need to remove a few of the slides and condense the material. You only have twenty minutes for the presentation, and it’s probably best to leave a little extra time at the end for questions. Additionally, I think the language is too simple. Since the audience will be mainly experts, it’s appropriate to use more technical vocabulary. There were also a few minor errors on the slides, so you should proofread them thoroughly and make the necessary corrections. If you’d like, I could send you a copy of the presentation I gave last month. That might give you an idea of what is expected. Please let me know. Regards,
Nancy |
댓글 없음:
댓글 쓰기